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Not the best animation or voice work I've seen. The voices did start to get a little annoying after a while. Next time, you might think about using multiple voice actors, instead of just one or two. Also, I thought the pace of the animation seemed a bit slow.
On a positive note, you did have a solid plot line, so props on that. You did have some nice jokes in there, and I would have loved to be able to read some of those newspaper articles you wrote. :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I was actually kind of worried about the voices because they were so... strange. We were using 12 fps and I was thinking about making it a bit faster but I wanted to see what people thought of this speed first.
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It wasn't great, but it wasn't terrible. I thought the animation was a little choppy. Also, some of the text went by so fast that it was hard to read (comprehension-wise, i understood at least 50%, but there were certain parts that went by so fast, i didn't even have a chance).
Not too bad for a first flash, though.
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